Dyskusja wikipedysty:Tibor BBB
Witaj. Twój artykuł nie nadaje się jeszcze do publikacji w Wikipedii, dlatego został on przeniesiony do twojego brudnopisu Wikipedysta:Tibor BBB/Ivan Ilić (pianista), gdzie możesz nad nim popracować. Przede wszystkim, dopracuj język, jakim pisane jest hasło - z mojego punktu widzenia wygląda na pracę z autotranslatorem, w tekście pełno jest niekonsekwencji językowych. Po skończeniu użyj zakładki przenieś, aby opublikować je ponownie. Pozdrawiam, Wojciech Pędzich Dyskusja 12:49, 16 sty 2012 (CET)
Hello, I see from your profile page that you are a near-native English speaker. I would like to improve the page, as per your recommendation. The translation from English Wikipedia was done by a native Polish speaker, so it is disappointing that she did such a poor job. You mentioned "inconsistencies of language" (w tekście pełno jest niekonsekwencji językowych). Can you please be more specific, so I can improve the article? Your help would be greatly appreciated. --Tibor BBB (dyskusja) 13:57, 16 sty 2012 (CET)
- Hi. I am glad I looked back at your talkpage - we usually do not answer in the place where the question was asked, but rather on the talkpage of the person that the message is meant for. Answering your question (sorry - I was not aware that you were not Polish) - the language inconsistencies result from the fact that Polish is an inflected language, and certain items were not inflected at all (names of composers for instance), while some bits of the text seem completely odd for a native Polish speaker.
- I will sit down to work with the article tonight, and should be able to polish it up at one go - I will let you know when I am done, although providing explanation to each correction I make would be too much like lecturing Polish. Wojciech Pędzich Dyskusja 15:07, 16 sty 2012 (CET)
- Hi again. Thank you very much for your kind response. I am responding here because your discussion page is very active; I don't want to make a mistake. I understand the problem with inflections, a lack of inflections would make a text very awkward indeed. Someone else (a Polish person) is now correcting the text little by little, which should make your work easier.
- I would also particularly appreciate it if you could help build a disambiguation page, as there will be two people on Polish Wikipedia with the same name. Kind regards, Tibor. --Tibor BBB (dyskusja) 15:28, 16 sty 2012 (CET)
- I have made a few touches to the text - I guess the references ought to be included in appropriate templates, which I will do on my second pass through the text. It reads much better thanks to the corrections which have been done and it is, I think, on a good way. Wojciech Pędzich Dyskusja 21:59, 16 sty 2012 (CET)
- Hi again. I have looked at the text witl a cool eye and think (and one of my colleagues agrees) that it is very publishable now. I have already moved it to the new location. By the way, you said there qwere two Ivan Ilić people - who is the second one (what is his profession) so that I can create the disambiguation page you mentioned earlier? Wojciech Pędzich Dyskusja 21:31, 17 sty 2012 (CET)
- Take a look at Ivan Ilić in the current state and the two pages that are linked there - this is how I have made the distinction between them ({{Inne znaczenia}} and {{ujednoznacznienie}} templates are used here). And thank you for the kind words - let me know if there is still anything I can help with, apart from the reference templates, which are not urgent, but helpful (and which I will do shortly...) Wojciech Pędzich Dyskusja 23:02, 17 sty 2012 (CET)
- Hi again. I have looked at the text witl a cool eye and think (and one of my colleagues agrees) that it is very publishable now. I have already moved it to the new location. By the way, you said there qwere two Ivan Ilić people - who is the second one (what is his profession) so that I can create the disambiguation page you mentioned earlier? Wojciech Pędzich Dyskusja 21:31, 17 sty 2012 (CET)